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Man Made Heaven

Man made heaven yet no one has heard about it where wrong is right as might inflicting injury horror terror and turmoil applause by defeating the justice with injustice with the means of bullying frightening and killing for gaining such heaven no one has heard and seen About real heaven silent soul whispers into the sense stubborn Coma dead sensation never allows to feel material consciousness the final destination debate who have seen or touched soul say, everybody bows down before power rests upon wealth name and fame gain by whatever means use ........................................ At the end only fuse.

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/21/2013 10:02:00 AM

I love it, It is trully a wonderful poem. Man made in heaven. When we gain fame, wealth, or power - at the end we have nothing. Everything stays here. Thanks for sharing and have a great day...... Lucilla

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2013 10:10:00 AM

Many thanks for your comment on this poem. Loved always, bl

Saanvi Dua

Date: 8/20/2013 9:45:00 AM

Nice write !! enjoyed stopping by reading this POWERFUL write of yours!! ..................Saanvi :))

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2013 9:59:00 AM

Well come my new poet friend and a lot of thanks to you for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2013 3:30:00 PM

I like the pattern you formed with this poem, BL. At first I thought maybe you were doing the reverse challenge!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2013 9:57:00 AM

Many thanks for your visit and for your comment. Smile...... Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2013 12:03:00 PM

- Reasonable thoughts about, what is or is not ... - I've written about "Heaven or Hell" today ..... read it if you want. - Wishing you a beautiful and great new week, my friend bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2013 12:13:00 PM

- ..... lol .... just wanted to try a different poem .... just to surprise ... it's not just flowers and love in my world :)))

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/19/2013 12:08:00 PM

Thanks for reading my write and for your valuable comment. Loved always, bl

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 8/17/2013 4:12:00 PM

† Well, I Am Here To Say That I Have Seen Heaven * This Afore I Ever Truly Knew Anything About It's Beauty ? Yet I Do Understand In Part Where You Are Coming From Here My Dear Friend ˜ So Blind, These Lost Children Amid Their Own Disarray ? Thank You For Your Wonderful Visit, Love, John

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/17/2013 4:23:00 PM

Thanks again my poet friend for your lovely comment. I am very happy for your true appreciation. Loved always, bl