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Man In the Moon

make a wish. the man in the moon will grant three wishes, mom said. . . my toes curling in wet grass catching fireflies in the dark hedge eyes dancing in the starlight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/7/2015 8:05:00 PM
I like the connection of fireflies and eyes, add on top of that "dark hedge." Nicely done.
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Date: 5/7/2015 2:46:00 PM
Beautifully penned Thomas I especially love the imagery of the final two lines:-) Hugs Jan xx
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