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Man in the Moon

Baby, come home soon
I grow tired of these conversations
with the man in the moon

I can not lie 
Mesmerized by his bright beauty
I keep talking to the sky

I pour out my soul
Waiting for his sweet reply
though it were you there to console

As the night comes to fade
Without a single response
I soon realize that I was played

Really he's such a fake
Pretending to soothe and ease the pain
Of my broken heart ache

O how I long for you
the softness of your voice 
whispering in my ear, its true

Baby I'll be home soon
but I get there
We'll talk to the same man in the moon

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:19:00 AM
    One of my favorites of yours...

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 9:37:00 AM
    Beautiful and vivid image...Emotion and depth........Thank you.................Walter

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 3:12:00 PM
    hi,its nice stopping by to read your poem..welcome to poetry....hope you find it exciting here like i did