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Man a Pause Limerick

Women Man a pause what's that a clause ? When man is better in any cause, No sons and fathers, Nor all the brothers, Will we never ever man a pause! ++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++++ Eyed Susan Contest Name any NEW limerick

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/28/2013 6:28:00 PM

Interesting piece Danesh. I like this one because it had me thinking.

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/28/2013 6:44:00 PM

true M.M but we men get mid life crisis. . . some adjust to it better than most that impact is less on me due to my child like behaviour or i could have been deep in depression by now. thanks

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/28/2013 5:54:00 PM

Hey Danesh buddy, Short but clever write... Ken

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/28/2013 5:57:00 PM

HI KEN, SORRY DON'T KNOW HOW PD MESSAGE WENT TO YOU. THANKS FOR THE COMMENT

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/28/2013 5:55:00 PM

PD you've changed my name! well i really don't know anything coz my mum keeps everything about ladies things to herself. . just that men gets mid life crisis and older women menopause. . . thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2013 5:27:00 PM

Hi Danehs, this is interesting... I haven't hit the stage yet... nor do i want to... good luck in the contest... Linda

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/28/2013 5:56:00 PM

the message above is for you. lol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2013 4:00:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Sara

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/28/2013 5:58:00 PM

thank you Sara