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Man

Man is superb in the whole nature. He can over power every creature. Man controls any animal by using his wit and makes use of one for his own benefit. Mighty lions are brought well under control. Big elephants are playing very useful role. Many animals are busy in service of man and work very hard, do what these can. Man can catch very poisonous snakes. Poison is used in medicines,everybody takes. Sea animals are caught for delicious food. Sea food is taken by man to keep good mood. Many birds are roasted to make tasty meat. Man can kill any one which he wants to eat. To trap other creatures ,he plans every day. He shoots every one which comes on his way. A person hides himself to save his life. The man becomes animal in his strife.

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Date: 1/11/2009 2:40:00 PM
Hi there Gurmukh! This is a powerful and paradoxal piece. Sad and wasteful when man with all his intelligence and wit, will use it to kill another. Wishing you and yours the best! Blessing to you! Mikki
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Date: 11/18/2008 1:40:00 PM
You've relayed your thought so well, great job done! Thanks for your comment. Rgds, Ernesto
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Date: 11/11/2008 7:46:00 PM
Powerful write that in a paradoxical way shows up the ignorance of man who, supposedly the highest life form, knows only how to destroy what he was meant to take care of. Congratulations to you, Gurmukh and to PoetrySoup on a well-deserved selection to be featured this week.
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Date: 11/11/2008 5:43:00 PM
Very deserved poem to be featured this week! Well said. ~ Congratulations on being featured this week. Carrie
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Date: 11/10/2008 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/10/2008 3:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on "Man" being featured. Yes he does become animal himself. Vince
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Date: 11/8/2008 8:42:00 AM
man is like god on earth. he was commanded by God to subdue the earth. and this piece sums it up. good work. jhl
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