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Mama's Treasure

kimo my mama's beautiful, long, auburn hair was piled up high on her head undone, hung to her waist tanka mama's lovely hair was quite untouched by scissors daddy loved it long I wonder if her headaches came from those heavy tresses senryu a beautician wrapped my mama's hair in a bun for her funeral 6/16/13

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Date: 7/1/2013 10:15:00 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:54:00 PM
oh MY This is probably one of the most touching ones on the list. I love it, dear. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 6/28/2013 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:35:00 AM
Beautiful and touching. congrats on your win
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Date: 6/28/2013 6:05:00 AM
its a great write. really love all your poems great. congrats for the win
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:15:00 PM
Touching. Great win. Congrats Gl.
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:11:00 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:56:00 PM
What memories we keep close to our hearts. This made me choke up a bit. congrats. BG
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Date: 6/16/2013 4:18:00 PM
Hi Joyce; I like this poem. I had an aunt that had her hair very long. My uncle liked it that way. She always had big head aches. Ine day she cut her hair and her head aches were gone. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla
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Date: 6/16/2013 3:34:00 PM
oh, this is wonderful, joyce!
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