Mallaise

Four young men and quite large Are cruising the mall like a barge. But I, diddle, diddle, Fit as a fiddle, Aim my cane at the middle and charge!

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Date: 9/22/2022 10:45:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! You have given an added dimension to the saying "Raising Cane!" Keep the laughs coming, I say. :) gw

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 9/23/2022 12:46:00 AM

Good one! I hadn't thought of that one! Liz

Date: 8/11/2022 5:30:00 PM

Thanks again, Linda Alice! Elizabeth

Date: 8/11/2022 5:47:00 AM

Too cute Elizabeth! Linda

Date: 8/10/2022 6:03:00 PM

Limericks are fun :-)

Date: 8/10/2022 6:48:00 AM

Funny + clever. I am partial to the forward charge of seniors. Best wishes, Brian

Date: 6/4/2022 6:24:00 AM

What a laugh, love your Limerick Elizabeth… Belle

Date: 5/21/2022 7:28:00 AM

I laughed out loud at this, I'm so glad I scrolled by it and was able to picture this. I also love the title lol. Thanks!

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 5/24/2022 8:06:00 PM

You feed my soul!

Date: 5/16/2022 10:38:00 AM

oh that is so cute. Good one, Elizabeth

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 5/22/2022 9:03:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I value your opinion.