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Making Love

Measuring tempo i spin you Around, i Kiss you up and then down your back, hearing Incredible moans of pleasure and delight. your Nails rip at my skin, climaxing. your Grip becomes tighter around my waist Lyrics pour from your mouth. an Opera. the melody pure and intoxicating. this Version of you, a picture perfect moment of Erotic and passionate Love Making... ........:JP)

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Date: 9/2/2009 2:28:00 PM
Geez! Wow, dude that's awesome! Please tell me that this was written for someone in your life. That's a great acrostic.
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Date: 7/21/2009 6:09:00 PM
It is exquisite...to be able to find that again..
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Date: 7/21/2009 8:56:00 AM
This is gorgeous!! Its an perfectly painted picture! Well done! Your one of my fave poets on here....Sabrina
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Date: 7/19/2009 10:08:00 AM
Well done! Beautiful, sensual and such a worthy Acrostic!
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Date: 7/18/2009 5:56:00 AM
i agree with all of the other comments! this is hot!
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Date: 7/18/2009 1:23:00 AM
Interesting Acrostic,Jared. Interesting mate you have there,also. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/17/2009 8:05:00 PM
This is molten hot with passion, Jared! I'll have to ask you to join the list of poets here who are sharing the tab for my cold showers. Awesome write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/17/2009 1:37:00 PM
Hot! Hot! write Jared, written with warmth and feeling>>James
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Date: 7/17/2009 6:53:00 AM
pasionata-passionate acrostic--charma
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Date: 7/16/2009 7:49:00 AM
Dear Jared, Excellent, spicy hot Acrostic very well done Thznk-YOU for YOUR Gracious comment on "Pearly Gates" Fhe contest isn't over yet YOU should try it If YOU do Good Luck I'll be reading more of YOU soon ALWAYS ...HG
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Date: 7/15/2009 4:00:00 PM
hot, hot... and yep .. very erotic... and thanks for your comment on my poem.. Constance
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