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I walked out to a cottonwood Who lives out in the hay And since he had no livelihood Decided I would stay A root of his became my chair He sighed and gently swayed As silently he cleaned the air I rested in his shade I told him 'bout my neighborhood The miles I walked each day But if he cared in all likelihood I knew he'd never say Though it was just a short affair His kindness was displayed And as I left I was aware A new friend had been made Daniel Turner

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Date: 6/23/2021 6:19:00 PM
I love this poem. We had a cottonwood tree once, it too was special to me. It was failing when we first moved to that house, and I nurtured the tree and babied it until it was strong and healthy. I was sad to leave it when we moved away, I did feel a special bond with that tree, I hated to leave it. Funny you should write this about a cottonwood. Maybe there is a special feeling of friendship they emit that we feel. Very sweet, peaceful, and interesting poem. In my FAVs!
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/26/2021 12:00:00 PM
I simply had to google how in the world the tree helped you know when the fish were biting! Very interesting!! I will pass this on to my sons and husband, they will be happy to listen to the cottonwoods any time they have this to tell! That is amazing!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/23/2021 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, BJ. Raised in the country, cottonwoods always told us when the fish were biting. That's how we knew it was a good time to go fishing .Great to see you again. Hoping you are well.
Date: 5/15/2021 7:39:00 PM
Well written. This was a fun read. Warm and welcoming... Ann
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Date: 2/27/2021 6:41:00 PM
...nice write....tree roots connect as do an animals neural brain fibres....a forests memories date thousands of years....so we are relatively as their ghostly friends ...stan sand
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Date: 4/10/2020 8:47:00 AM
Nice piece of work, Daniel. I love the easy-going rhythm you put in this poem. ...Fran
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Date: 2/29/2020 5:12:00 PM
The reason we brought our place was for the trees. They provide us with shade during the summer. I can see why you got POTD. It is a super poem. To be sure what you talked about to your new friend will never be repeated.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/29/2020 8:41:00 PM
Yes ma'am i think my secrets are safe:) Thank you very much for the warm friendly visit. I hope you are well, Bette.
Date: 2/22/2020 7:09:00 PM
Hello Daniel Turner, yes a new friend was made. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/29/2020 8:39:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene.
Date: 2/14/2020 7:29:00 PM
I see this got POTD. It's so deserving of it. I wrote a haiku set a long time ago with similar theme. I love my trees we planted!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2020 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Yeah. I do love trees!
Date: 2/14/2020 7:07:00 AM
Hi Daniel, I don’t know how I missed this one. I don’t think I’ve read a poem about “ Cottonwood” in this manner before. Such a well written and clever write. Congrats on getting the poem of the day. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2020 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Alexis. Glad you dropped in:)
Date: 2/12/2020 2:56:00 PM
Lovely! Congratulations on POTD!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/13/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. Wonderful to see you again.
Date: 2/12/2020 11:05:00 AM
I really like this one, Daniel. No wonder it was Poem of the Day last week! Janice
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/12/2020 11:50:00 AM
Thank you, Janice. Hope you are staying dry.
Date: 2/12/2020 10:03:00 AM
Magnificent, love it Daniel. Kurt
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/12/2020 11:49:00 AM
Thank you, Kurt.
Date: 2/11/2020 3:12:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Daniel.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/12/2020 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Line. Wonderful to see you again:)
Date: 2/10/2020 9:55:00 PM
Just an ingenious write on a topic that --- well, who would ever think to write about cottonwood, except a Poet of the Day! Congrats! Best wishes, Gershon
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/11/2020 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate you support:)
Date: 2/9/2020 8:40:00 PM
I know I commented on this favorite poem, but don't see my comment Daniel. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Daniel. I loved this heartfelt love for trees my friend. It is wonderful to have you back at PS again. Bravo! xxoo
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/14/2020 2:05:00 AM
That I am! xxoo
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/9/2020 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, This is my best Robert Frost imitation. I had been reading some of his poems and this is what came out. Mrs Connie, you have always been my number 1 fan:)
Date: 2/9/2020 3:52:00 PM
I love the way you personified the Cottonwood tree, Daniel. Just look at the ways trees benefit us -- providing shade, and cleansing the air. I can see why this got a POTD, Daniel. Congratulations! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/9/2020 8:44:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn. Always a pleasure when you drop by:)
Date: 2/9/2020 12:26:00 PM
Nice! Congratulations on POTD, Daniel. Terrific write with a great message.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/9/2020 12:33:00 PM
Thank you Charles. I appreciate you dropping by to read and comment:)
Date: 2/7/2020 11:44:00 AM
This is awesome!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/7/2020 12:11:00 PM
Thank you, Anna. I am glad you enjoyed it. I love Robert Frost and this is my attempt at writing a "Robert Frost" poem. I appreciate your kindness:)
Date: 2/6/2020 9:18:00 PM
I love cottonwoods :))) Congrats on POTD! Delightful piece Daniel. Hugs! xomo
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/6/2020 10:55:00 PM
Thanks Mo:) Great to see you again.
Date: 2/6/2020 6:31:00 PM
Very Nice!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/6/2020 6:34:00 PM
Thank you. I am a big fan of Robert Frost. I was trying to write a Robert Frost poem although I think it might be a little too simple. Wonderful to see you again, Kurt, and congratulations on the new book:)
Date: 2/5/2020 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, a great poem!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/5/2020 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Tania. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 2/5/2020 2:29:00 PM
:) Your little story made me smile. This is cute, clever and creative. Congratulations Daniel, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/5/2020 2:40:00 PM
Making you smile, makes me smile. Thank you, Brandy:)
Date: 2/5/2020 12:53:00 PM
A pleasure to be rereading this poem, Danny....and to deliver congratulations re POTD award! Regards // paul
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/5/2020 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Paul. Wonderful to see you again. everything going OK?
Date: 2/5/2020 10:55:00 AM
Having read the poem and your comments You are at one with nature, you have created a safe haven for birds and wildlife it sounds idyllic. Many congratulations on your POTD Daniel:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/5/2020 11:05:00 AM
Jan. being raised in rural America, most of my youth was spent around trees, lakes and gardens. They simply became a large part of my life. I can nurse a sick tree better than I can nurse a sick child. lol Thank you for a lovely visit. Great to see you again:)
Date: 2/5/2020 10:49:00 AM
Excellent POTD DT! Congratulations :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/5/2020 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. Wonderful to see you. How's thangs?
Date: 2/5/2020 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. I love to be outside with the trees and birds. A great friend that listens is the best. I have never had a tree talk back to me. Enjoy your day......
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/5/2020 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Paula. Yes, even in my advancing years I still love to play in the dirt. Sometimes all a body needs is for someone/something to listen as we vent and work through our problems. Thanks for the lovely visit:)
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