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Maker of Good Feeling Pill

The pill in sticky sweaty hands doth lie Full of importance doesn't know why The route finder has decided the journey, commencing. via the saliva gland which wets the pill they're dispensing Along the path from the pharynx where you are swallowed Taking the A road to the oesophagus where pushing is allowed Until it reaches journeys end the main line station of stomach Then on to many branch lines being dispersed to enact Have you realised which pill is the be all and end all of your being What is the name of this important maker of good feeling The Happy Pill, if your happy nothing else is of importance Happiness is and Happiness does, with abundance. Pill of Life Contest dated 22/01/2013

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Date: 2/26/2013 2:18:00 PM
Seren,, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2013 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Linda for the congrats
Date: 2/24/2013 6:19:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2013 3:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Debbie
Date: 2/24/2013 12:47:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Sara ...Seren
Date: 2/24/2013 11:29:00 AM
I followed that pill all the way, Seren! Congratulations! Cheers, Roy
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 1:09:00 PM
lol what a journey .......Seren
Date: 2/24/2013 10:02:00 AM
Many congratulations My little star what a good one xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 1:09:00 PM
diolch fy chwaer fawr (thank you my big sister).....Seren
Date: 2/24/2013 3:32:00 AM
And where do you get these pills, Seren?... A doctor or can you buy them over-the counter?...Congratulations my friend...well deserved! - Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 1:10:00 PM
i am the maker of the happy pill, i am the one to bring happiness......Seren
Date: 2/23/2013 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations Serene..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 1:12:00 PM
its ok Donna a few people type Serene will answer to most things ....Seren
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/23/2013 10:12:00 PM
Sorry Seren
Date: 2/23/2013 8:31:00 PM
It seemed as if we were on the journey ...the path of the happy pill. Write me a prescription if it works!! Congratulations on your win!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2013 1:12:00 PM
as i said earlier I am the maker of the happiness pill, ....Seren
Date: 2/23/2013 6:55:00 PM
glad to see you on the list, Seren, I sure remember this cute poem. Congratulations.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/23/2013 7:30:00 PM
Thanks Andrea .....Seren
Date: 2/23/2013 5:29:00 PM
congrats on your win Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/23/2013 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Joseph....Seren
Date: 1/23/2013 8:00:00 AM
Hi there this is good Seren can I have one please ? xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/23/2013 8:03:00 AM
Nah Mandy you dont need one of these....Seren
Date: 1/22/2013 10:26:00 PM
A clever way to approach the theme, which I find kind of difficult, so I commend you on this poem, Seren. I want to buy a bunch of those happy pills. Well, I am pretty happy already but I have loved ones who could use them as well!
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Date: 1/22/2013 10:29:00 PM
Andrea, I try to write "different" poetry, doesn't always work,but have fun trying, as you say was a difficult one to approach....Seren
Date: 1/22/2013 2:20:00 PM
a very knowledgable and very well written poem... Harry
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2013 9:35:00 PM
Thanks Harry was trying to do something different......Seren
Date: 1/22/2013 12:49:00 PM
there are pills for happiness. i wish there wer'nt but there are.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2013 1:08:00 PM
Wasn't thinking of the drug induced pills. ...Seren
Date: 1/22/2013 12:11:00 PM
I take a bottle of them per day, leaves a permanent smile on my face :) enjoyed your write, love Elizabeth
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2013 12:13:00 PM
Elizabeth thank you for commenting, wasn't sure when i wrote this if it made sense lol. You understood so that's great.....Seren

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