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time heals or so they say gives the illusion of comforting barely ~ it merely glosses over at best of times dulls our suffering we learn to live with pain grin and bear the heartache we befriend shadows in the dark through the night that keep us awake we manage to calm the beast though it feeds on our broken heart we manage somehow to coexist so it doesn’t fully tear us apart we understand that time can be our ally if we learn to cope as best we can we remember to not give up so must get back on the caravan we tolerate inevitable fluctuations bravely ride the waves of emotion we welcome nature’s cycles connect with land and ocean we embrace our role within this universe sublime as we invite peace within and treasure the miracle of time AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on May 24, 2021 for contest TIME sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE - RANKED 5TH

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Date: 5/28/2021 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. I love your line, "we remember to not give up." Have a blessed day/weekend................
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Date: 5/28/2021 6:20:00 AM
Lovely Write, Line, congratulations:)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2021 1:55:00 PM
Thank you, Jo ~
Date: 5/27/2021 11:27:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2021 1:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Terry ~
Date: 5/27/2021 6:57:00 PM
Oh wow! We need to read this through the eyes of our soul. A fave. Congrats on your win, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/28/2021 1:56:00 PM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and compliment ~
Date: 5/24/2021 10:54:00 PM
Wow your words are so true dearest Line and I feel you have penned the winner here with this beautiful moving poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 5/24/2021 6:07:00 PM
Time does heal. I can attest to that. Wonderfully written. Have a great day.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2021 6:25:00 PM
Thanks, David. Much appreciated ~
Date: 5/24/2021 4:00:00 PM
Hello Lin, this oem looks likea a winner. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/25/2021 3:02:00 PM
Hello Lin, enjoy your evening . You are welcome. Hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2021 6:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene ~
Date: 5/24/2021 1:52:00 PM
A fine, thought-provoking verse, Line. I really enjoyed reading it and wish you the best in your contest submission.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2021 3:09:00 PM
Thanks, Milton ~
Date: 5/24/2021 12:40:00 PM
Wonderfully written poem with wise statements and perfect word choice, good for a high contest placement.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2021 1:43:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Lasaad. Most appreciated ~

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