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Make Me Hate Your Face

I focus on things that make me hate your face. Maybe then the pain will fade. I know deep inside I care about your life, but right now I just want to forget. You don't understand, never will, how you've pierced my heart. I wish I could say it will just go away, but the blade cut too deep. I feel the blood, it trickles down my chest, and it draws me to my knees. I fall to the floor, pray it will all finish now, maybe this pain will finally be undone.

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Date: 11/28/2009 11:58:00 PM
The pains of love, great write, Bettinna.
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Date: 11/25/2009 10:35:00 AM
Betty - ocngrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/25/2009 10:27:00 AM
This write shows raw emotion, definitely worthy of a feature.....:JP]
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Date: 11/23/2009 7:33:00 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/23/2009 7:33:00 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/23/2009 11:48:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week >> James
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Betty. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 3:02:00 AM
Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 11/22/2009 5:43:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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