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Blinding silver streak Explodes Rocks crash Roof rattles Cracked sky Spills fury Pent up rage Inflicted Doors Windows Blown open Wild wind Laces through Snuggled up Tight and warm Bear hugging Howling storm Wrestling Chest crushing Rib crunching Dominion Pinned down Struggling beneath Seeking for some Lasting release I won't let this Tempest leave Make it rain Forty days And forty nights Yet Somehow Some way I fall in Dream It slinks away And all I Wake up to Is this Fresh morning Kiss

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Date: 5/8/2024 9:34:00 PM
Very nice expressive poem, with a good ending. Carol Louise
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Date: 8/4/2022 9:52:00 PM
Beyond the turmoil, the sanctuary of that fresh kiss, lovely :)
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Steven Young
Date: 8/11/2022 5:53:00 PM
Rose, thanks. Every morning is a kiss, (or should be.) (Sorry for late reply.)
Date: 8/4/2022 7:31:00 AM
I'm drawn to this passionate poem Steven. Linda
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Steven Young
Date: 8/4/2022 8:07:00 AM
Thank you for reading it, Linda, and letting me know your thoughts.

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