Make Comments, Corrections and Criticisms

You can always give me some corrections and comments and criticism. My three C's if you please while I skinned my knees. When I sent God my Letter, He gave me a great sweater; Did become better and better; Until we had stormy weather. While at church should stay and pray; So do have a delightful happy day; We never will suffer from dismay; My faith in God surely do display. When God will bare all of my sin, Will pray to God and say Amen; Make many friends do intend; More prayers to God shall send. When I will have been baptized, My faith in mighty God realized; Did met what he planned for me; From all of my sin was set free. When priest In pulpit, pulled a prank; We only will have our God to thank; Into all of his sins my teeth had sank; Surely was a mean, stubborn crank. When we would have a book review, From back of whale water did spew; Preposterous priest author actually knew; Always approved of His (her) point of view. When enough is enough this is enough; Priest scaled my sins which were tough; When I wore sloppy sins off the cuff, God with me became mighty gruff.