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Let's imagine that you loved me Would it be so hard to do? And then, we'll pretend - while making believe - that I might, ...love you too What would happen if you held me Would it change the things you've planned? Then, imagine love that lasts 'til the end... Just pretend..... if you can... We'll just pretend..., (again), we're more than friends, .. (and then) that love ... happens within... where dreams come true, (do come true) - (ours could come true),...... Would you.... pretend? Let's imagine it's tomorrow Is it just too far to see? Here we are, you and me, with stars up above , making love ............ can't you see? It could happen... if you let it It would not be hard to do But it's only a game, that we could make real..... if believed. - Let's believe ! If you could see, ...(how close you are),.. beyond the stars, (what's ours) .... is not so far away Believe in me... we'll wish on stars... it's not so hard Just imagine that you loved me Would it be too hard to do? ______________________________________________________________ 12/10/15 Inspired by the contest hosted by Craig Cornish To be read along with the lovely music of "Sweet Remembrance Of You" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHzw9TsMmsA

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Date: 12/18/2015 11:30:00 PM
Great take with this lovely song Carrie.. Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 12/18/2015 10:03:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats.... LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2015 2:24:00 PM
I can see why you won.There is desired sense and a feeling of hope that dreams can come true if only all the reasons were known...I thought is was a tough contest by Craig..your poem fit so well..congratulations my poetic friend..
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Date: 12/18/2015 7:35:00 AM
Congrats, what a thought provoking poem with music to go with it. DMB
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Date: 12/17/2015 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations on #1! I really like how you did this. Well done!
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Date: 12/17/2015 4:46:00 PM
congrats on your win. SKAT
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