Make Believe

I love living in my own little World I'm happy there it's OK. It's much more fun than the real One For every days an Holiday. My worlds,a world without Sorrows In my world there is no Pain. There's no rich,no poor,no kings or Queens In my world, no one person will Reign. It's a world of many Colours A world where everyone is Free. It's a world of peace and Love A world of compassion and Tranquility. I know my worlds not the real One Its only my world of make Believe. But it's a world I often Visit If it's only in my Dreams.

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/7/2023 9:58:00 AM

This world can be a harsh place. I have a world of my own I escape to now and then, though can't stay there long. Great poem, John! Blessings, Kim M

John Read
Date: 7/7/2023 11:24:00 AM

Thank you Kim for your kind words God Bless.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/3/2023 7:00:00 PM

Sounds a lovely world to me even though it’s a dreamers fantasy. Lovely poetry brother John… Belle

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/4/2023 1:44:00 PM

Will do!

John Read
Date: 7/4/2023 5:26:00 AM

The world of today has become a nightmare sister Belle,so I'll keep on dreaming. Belle, Gordon has joined FFP, check out his poems when he starts posting on there when you have time.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/3/2023 3:22:00 PM

Thanks John for your advice on GDP which I have tonight joined the forum and will add some poems later in the week so thanks again. Blessings,Gordon

John Read
Date: 7/4/2023 5:22:00 AM

Hi Gordon , I'see you had joined FFP, I left you a message on there. God bless.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/3/2023 12:15:00 PM

Lovely penning John with good rhyme and flow, with nice imagery too. I would also be accused of living in my little own world, but it's one to love. I checked out the FFP you said about, I don't like the idea of only accepting original stuff that's not been on other websites but I'm still thinking about it. Take care, Gordon

John Read
Date: 7/3/2023 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Gordon for your time and comment. If you do decide to post on FFP, choose the forum first,you can post anything on there. Take care.