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Make a Wish

Make it so that all hearts' discs are unformatted, To rid them of hatred, greed and discrimination. Pray they become clean and pure, as when created. Teach them anew; love, generosity and compassion To ensure a bright future for our next generation! Form:English Quintain 11/07/16 Rhyme ababb Contest: Make a wish Sponsor: Kim Merryman Placed 7

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/20/2016 12:58:00 PM

congratulations on this great quatrain, Sunita, :)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/21/2016 10:47:00 AM

Thanks Eve, it has been my first trial of this form of poetry. I studied at univ. but never tried to compose lines in this way. I'm happy it has been appreciated. :) Sunita

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/16/2016 2:05:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your placement in the contest, Sunita! Loved reading it again. Hugs, Sandra

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/17/2016 12:08:00 AM

Thanks Sandra for going through again. Its great encouragement. Your poems, I read are simply marvelous! :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/15/2016 11:31:00 PM

Hi Sunita, Congratulations on your 7th place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/16/2016 12:06:00 AM

Thanks, you liked it. :) Sunita.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/15/2016 11:11:00 PM

Thanks for going through it and glad you like my poem. It was an interesting theme to write upon. Thanks Kim for the contests. I love the contest on soup. Congrats to all the winners here! :D Sunita.

Jesse Day

Date: 7/15/2016 11:11:00 PM

Congrats on your 7th place win in the Make a Wish contest - A very special wish to share! - Jesse

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/15/2016 11:15:00 PM

Thanks Jesse for through it. Congrats to you too. :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/15/2016 9:26:00 PM

Great write! Sunita, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/15/2016 10:43:00 PM

Thanks. It was an interesting theme from you. I'm glad it was appreciated. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2016 9:16:00 PM

a most wonderful wish, Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/15/2016 10:42:00 PM

Thanks dear hope it is granted! :D

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/13/2016 2:08:00 PM

I really like your line, "Make it so that all hearts discs are unformatted," Sunita! If only we could. Such an amazing wish this is and how nicely you present it in this lovely Quintain. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/14/2016 10:34:00 AM

That's true...if only we could...But I feel human has gone on a one way track with no U-turn and towards its destruction it goes unfortunately. Thanks you enjoyed it Sandra :)

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 7/12/2016 11:52:00 AM

This one is lovely, a wish for us to be humans!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/13/2016 11:37:00 AM

Hmmm..ya, may be one day this wish will be fulfilled...:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2016 9:04:00 AM

Very nice quintain on this topic!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/12/2016 10:02:00 AM

thanks Andrea, it being a pleasure writing for the contests and reading all your nice lines. :)