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You lavish the pristine quantum of your soul growing wings, flourishing spirit, more capable and equal. Through no fault of your own, your body begins to dwindle. You regress. Strong being become feeble, Ardent senses grow dull, hardy constitution start to crumble. And wonder when did my golden dreams betrayed me to their clutch If I had to make a wish , I would wish love for eternity To capture the youth I once had when a simple kiss means so much And recapture every memory of my young harmony Regain enthusiasm of life moving on perfectly 7/9/2016

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Date: 7/18/2016 10:29:00 AM
Eve, a perfect poem and a wonderful wish lady! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 7/16/2016 9:43:00 AM
Hi Eve, It's good to see you in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/15/2016 11:15:00 PM
Congrats on your 4th place win in the Make a Wish contest - I'll share that wish with you! - Jesse
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Date: 7/15/2016 10:55:00 PM
This is wonderful Eve. Congrats. :)
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Date: 7/15/2016 9:31:00 PM
Eve, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating!
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Date: 7/15/2016 9:30:00 PM
Eve, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating!
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Date: 7/10/2016 7:08:00 PM
I enjoyed your wonderful write....good luck with the contest.
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Date: 7/10/2016 12:49:00 PM
Very good and I agree. Blessed with a loving union is a gift in my life that does, indeed, often bring on a teenage feeling. Your poem should resonate with many people and draw them in - it did me ... CayCay
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:52:00 AM
Mrs Eve, youth is gift of nature, but age, age is a work of art. I love the sentiment of your write and the lovely poem. Good luck!
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Date: 7/9/2016 6:30:00 PM
Love the sentiment and adore the image Eve! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/9/2016 5:20:00 PM
Hi Eve, I enjoyed your take on the contest.Wouldn't that be somthing if we could stay young forever? And experience an eternal love? You have penned an excellent wish. Good luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis P.S. The picture of Herb made me laugh out loud!
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Date: 7/9/2016 5:09:00 PM
eve, such a impressive write with a dream to stay young at heart with a healthy body... enjoyed this!.. huggs
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