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Majesty of the Bird of Prey

Majesty Of The Bird Of Prey (Eyes of the Hawk) In wilderness flies the bird of prey above the earthly fight and battle Far from immense foaming ocean spray far above pastures and fat cattle Gliding along spying for its meal with those sharp all seeing eyes Blessed with sharp claws of steel marauder of the gentle blue skies Soaring in wait for its coming kill be it furry animal,fowl or fish Nature blesses with awe, good or ill such meaty meals,what a tasty dish To its victims what a monster it may be A wonder to we that can much further see. Xxxxxxx Xxxxxxxx Nov, 12 1981 Note: The splendor and beauty of Nature awes us but there is the savage side to be seen too. And that savage side teaches us that sacrifices to survive require the ending of life of others. Nowhere is that better seen or understood than in the actions of the earth's predators. Those that fly interest me more, for as young boy I dreamed of flying thousands of times.

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Date: 6/27/2015 2:05:00 AM
Robert, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/18/2015 10:29:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, it paints a vivid picture of beauty and the beast that are the predators of the sky. Well done, Kind Regards, Laura.
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Date: 6/11/2015 6:45:00 PM
Yes, nature can be cruel at times, but it has always been so... A mother bird needs to kill the worm so her babies can survive... An interesting and captivating poem, my friend! Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 6/10/2015 7:21:00 PM
Robert, please accept my congratulations on this all-around winner! Awesome symbolism and imagery make it an enjoyable read, deserving of a "7!" Warmest regards. Pandita"
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Date: 6/10/2015 3:47:00 PM
A good counterbalance on the beauty of life and also the raw energy and viciousness of the bird of prey foraging Robert, congratulations..'
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:58:00 AM
This write about birds of prey is majestic in itself, Robert. Nature follows its rules and needs. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:19:00 AM
Awesome! This one is for the hawk, but it could easily describe owls. I think they are the most beautiful of all birds.
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Date: 6/9/2015 2:34:00 PM
Excellent! I have a hawk in my neighborhood and my cat is upset about not getting to go outside, but I'd rather not have her flung to the ground with a talon through her skull. I enjoyed this one.
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Date: 6/9/2015 1:16:00 PM
yes, nature does have its dark side and it's how God intended! I really like how you showed it with this descriptive sonnet!
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:44:00 AM
Robert. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 10:13:00 AM
I can see you are a master of nature poems! Julia, giving you the highest mark.
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Date: 6/9/2015 7:26:00 AM
Hi, Robert, What a wonderful write about the hawk. And congratulations on your contest win. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 6/9/2015 6:26:00 AM
Nature is of two extremes, one of beauty and one savagery, Great write and win...Congrats..
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Date: 6/9/2015 3:59:00 AM
Love the notes at the end of the very descriptive poem - am sure we have had that dream too:-) congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:06:00 PM
Congrats Robert, I enjoyed reading this and concur with your note - I too dreamt of the skies...
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:51:00 PM
Excellent descriptiveness and rhyme! Congrats on your win, Robert! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/8/2015 4:39:00 PM
very enthralling Robert you took me there congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:52:00 AM
You fly high with this piece my friend!
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Date: 6/8/2015 9:09:00 AM
Tremendous I hope you put it favorite old poems contest looks like a big winner to me
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:31:00 AM
Beautiful flowing rhyme. Great word choice! A 7!
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