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She drifts in radiance waking nightfall with palette's hues, tresses of amber flames drip of vibrant sensation… and so, in the glide of July nestling on grass and bouquets, she waltzes through moon’s notes with a luster of desire, bursting into sheer madness on my glossed skin… Oh how she flickers more dauntless than a blend of passion and ease , flitting like a gypsy whose spirit enters inside my pores... And Maiden of Summer thrusts her tanned arms fluid, raw, loving: then, to explode into an awakened prance which enhances love's sizzle through her open light gently reeling with my bold adventures; only to fade quickly in luscious splendour. Screwed XV by Rob Carmack Uploaded 10.16.2016

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Date: 5/17/2017 8:19:00 PM
Wow wow, another breathtaking piece. You are just incredibly amazing :)
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Date: 12/29/2016 5:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette. I love the imagery - you paint such a vivid picture. Agnes
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Date: 12/23/2016 3:58:00 PM
How beautiful and appealing, Nette! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 12/23/2016 1:57:00 PM
"in the glide of" - Nette, your poems take us gliding through the air, shimmering in the beauty of your perceptions of the world.
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Date: 12/23/2016 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on your second chance win! Great poem! :-)
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Date: 12/22/2016 8:59:00 PM
This is beautiful, Nette, I love the vision you have created. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/22/2016 8:35:00 PM
I was trying to figure out my favorite part, but it seems my favorite part is the whole. Thank you and congrats.
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Date: 10/21/2016 8:23:00 PM
Hi Nette, This is so beautiful. You painted a lovely picture with words. Good personification. A big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/18/2016 6:15:00 AM
so beautifully written.... A big 7... Good luck with the contest...
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Date: 10/18/2016 2:32:00 AM
This is a majestic beauty and so precious my dear friend, Nette! A high 7! What more can I say? Thank you so much. love lots and hug, Leonora
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:22:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful, Nette! Summer personified through the use of captivating poetic language! When you write like this you I can feel the passion and radiance of your golden pen! #7+++ Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/17/2016 6:11:00 AM
Good personification..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go..Very descriptive of early summer..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2016 5:32:00 AM
Sparkling diamonds of expressions that dazzle the heart and mind dear, nette! Good luck and a seven!
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Date: 10/16/2016 6:59:00 PM
Nette,Nette, this poem glows with summer delight. You have outdone yourself with this magnificent masterpiece! A fave for me too! I loved it! 7 ; )
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Date: 10/16/2016 6:34:00 PM
The first line drew me in - what a beautiful description, Nette. A fave.
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Date: 10/16/2016 2:27:00 PM
Possibly more beautiful than the actual change. Thrilling poetry, nette.
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Date: 10/16/2016 2:08:00 PM
The imagery here is splendiferous! Skillfully rendered. Good luck...
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Date: 10/16/2016 12:25:00 PM
- This is beautiful, my favorite for today - Best wishes for a beautiful new week, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2016 10:30:00 AM
Rendering clouds become her dress as she clamors for the day's ball she is the light and the princess before she puts back on her shawl..couldn't help myself nette..your poetry reminded me of a poem I wrote years ago..yours has a beauty with jeweled light...good luck
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