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Magnet

There is a gigantic magnet somewhere far out in deepest space that holds the planets in their place sun and moon too, do rise and set. All controlled by this magnet that makes the moon govern the tides whilst stars do whisper in asides of this and that caught in its jet. Yet who controls it, this magnet? for that one must read the book and not just skimp but really look read every word and heaven get. Our life of free will is governed by vast things beyond our knowledge all courses pre-set by a hedge that path of god to us is wed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/11/2015 3:56:00 PM
this is a very good philosophical type poem Shadow! I am glad I thought to come back and search for a recent one of yours I had not seen!
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Date: 2/5/2015 4:53:00 PM
You know, it's quite believable that there's a huge magnet out there. A beautifully penned sentiment.
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Date: 2/3/2015 3:15:00 PM
very touching write indeed
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/3/2015 5:43:00 PM
ty Jack appreciated hugs
Date: 2/1/2015 6:18:00 PM
deep touching beautiful pen linda dear friend bless you
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/3/2015 5:42:00 PM
dearest Liam ty my friend hugs
Date: 2/1/2015 4:55:00 AM
Hi Shadow...this piece really moved me. I love the powerful message, the beautiful form used...thank you for sharing such profound insights...rgds, 7habang
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Date: 2/1/2015 5:37:00 PM
ty Thabang appreciated hugs

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