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Magic Path

I wish there was a magic path that lead to you with no way out. I wish but all I see ahead of me- an endless field with thorns and shields, that send me back where my feet bleed. And here, I wish there was a magic path that lead to you with no way back, but all I see - closed gates ahead of me that send me back with a broken heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/16/2020 4:24:00 AM
Closed door leave open wounds. But we will learn sweetness and pain. Thank you Victoria for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
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Date: 11/26/2019 1:29:00 PM
This is a heartbreaking write my friend.. no one wants a closed door...
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Date: 11/26/2019 1:38:00 PM
hopefully it didn't make you sad, Silent..it is just that to me it seems to be always closed..:/

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