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Magic of a Mountain Climb

Rocky trail Fallen trees Fresh scent of pine leaves Scattered acorns Wild blooms Thundering sounds of a graceful brook Brightly red Cylindrical Snow flowers Show-stoppers for enthusiastic hikers Chirpy Jays Traces of wild foxes Immensity of rocky mainstays Spring storm Shivery gales Sprays of tiny snowflakes Wood bridge Nimble stream Magic of a mountain climb

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/7/2021 2:26:00 PM

There is something magic in your view. Bringing it to us is a great gift....so TY!

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/14/2021 2:50:00 PM

There is always a magic in the nature which makes us enjoy the view, don't you think?

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/4/2021 5:41:00 PM

All of these things, Smita, wondrously and preciously penned. Thank you, Gershon

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/6/2021 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Gershon! It's the inspiration from the woods :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/4/2021 2:51:00 PM

Lovely poem, Smita, that speaks to the reader and takes the reader along on your scenic ride. I was there too.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/6/2021 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Vijay! The ride was absolutely scenic and very refreshing!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/17/2021 10:24:00 AM

What a scenic hike! No place is as healing and carefree as Nature! You have taken me heart and soul to the magic of Mother Earth! A genuine rendition into an expressive poetry! A great pleasure to read you, Smita! My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 6/23/2021 10:49:00 AM

So sweet of you Besma to stop by! It's a great pleasure to read your comment too! Thank you!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/15/2021 6:14:00 AM

Wonderful images, felt I was on a walk with you.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 6/15/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thank you Rama!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/31/2021 9:27:00 AM

A very descriptive work about a mountain walk at some point in your life. I went there through reading your poem. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 6/6/2021 8:39:00 PM

Thank you Sara for visiting!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/29/2021 1:29:00 AM

Love your journey and how you take the read there. Lovely poem.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 6/6/2021 8:39:00 PM

Thank you Harry!

Judy Ball

Date: 5/27/2021 2:40:00 PM

Beautiful imagery here. I love walking in the woods and listening to the sounds of nature. Not big on city life at all and hate being buried in concrete in the city. Good job. God Bless, JB

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/28/2021 10:00:00 AM

Thank you Judy! Nature has so much to offer besides the truth and tranquility!! I truly enjoy being in nature!

John Gondolf

Date: 5/27/2021 12:54:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Smita, I felt like I was right there hiking through the woods. John

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/28/2021 10:00:00 AM

Thank you John!