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We stand beneath an unfamiliar moon Where nature's magic weaves a crimson loom To contradict what ancients understood The world survives and has not met its doom __________________________________________ Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper "Super Moon Eclipse" 10/3/15

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Skat A

Date: 10/9/2015 12:26:00 AM

Carrie, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2015 3:27:00 PM

Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:36:00 AM

Wonderful write Carrie! Congrats on superb win!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2015 3:26:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2015 2:30:00 PM

Carrie, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/7/2015 1:43:00 PM

What a great write for a winner. Congrats.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/5/2015 11:54:00 AM

Scary, huh. Great photo too> Love, daver

Sneha Rv

Date: 10/5/2015 6:27:00 AM

This is so so lovely, dear Carrie!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/3/2015 10:21:00 PM

Enjoyed this, nice rhymes and I like the reference to ancient beliefs..BG

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2015 4:54:00 PM

beautiful image and imagery Carrie - it really is an awesome sight seeing the supermoon eclipse - hope I'm still around to witness the next one:-)good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan