Magic Minichu

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Feb. 25, 2024 11.26am

This funny magician can make you a crawling snow white with big dark spots dalmatian His best magic turns louts into huge pots so quick His spell blows fart in slots smells This funny magician turns louts into huge pots smells

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/21/2024 11:41:00 AM

Dear Len, my wonderful poet friend, this is a fun and fantastic poem! Indeed, your golden pen is as poetic as it is magical. Your imagination, wit and artistry shines upon the page! Thank you for the smiles your verse brings. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Len Gasun
Date: 3/31/2024 4:10:00 AM

Hello my dearest poet friend. Thank you so much belatedly for coming by to read my poem and your wonderful & uplifting comments. Thank you VVM. So much appreciated with your warm wishes, too. I am so sorry if I came only now because of unexpected circumstances in the family. But I will try to catch up here soon by visiting and reading from you and others here. Missing you all. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/11/2024 2:34:00 PM

Pretty funny!

Len Gasun
Date: 3/27/2024 1:18:00 AM

Belated thank you for reading and commenting on my poem my dear poet friend. God bless you alwys and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/29/2024 8:51:00 AM

What a fun/cute/creative write. Hugs... Hope you are having a wonderful day writing away....................

Len Gasun
Date: 3/27/2024 1:02:00 AM

Belated thank you for reading and commenting on my poem my dear poet friend Paula. Sorry for coming late to reply. I've just had a tough time recently. May God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/29/2024 4:38:00 AM

Dear Len, Your poem is a whimsical and humorous journey into the world of magic and transformation. You evoke laughter and amusement through playful imagery and clever wordplay, turning mundane scenes into comical marvels. Your wit and creativity shine brightly in this delightful piece. You have a talent for weaving laughter into poetry. - Blessings, Daniel

Len Gasun
Date: 3/27/2024 12:34:00 AM

Belated thank you for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend. So much appreciated. Blessings. Hugs