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Magic Kisses and Valentine Wishes

The year my dad left for heaven My mother made a valentine. She decked and turned it into a pleasant one making it for her special love divine She looked at it as a devotee consigned. She damped it with kisses sublime. Then she cut its middle of the heart and placed her photo in a slit with a rhyming quintain and she wove a red ribbon smartly I could thus easily read her wishes partly “Love you dear, I’m happy to be your wife To me you’re like a rock through bad times Your love has blessed me blissful life To me you're my cascade in all the good times Waiting and wishing with you to reunite” +++ January 28, 2015 Form : Quintain (English) Contest: Magic kisses and Valentine wishes

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Date: 5/12/2016 11:33:00 AM
Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.
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Date: 2/1/2015 3:48:00 PM
DR RAM, Awesome magic win.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:43:00 AM
This is truly magic valentine Mahtasaab. God bless. Congrats on win. With regards Rajat
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Date: 1/31/2015 6:54:00 PM
Congrad's on Your win. So pleasant to read your verse this evening. I hope you get your wish Ram. Light & Love
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Date: 1/31/2015 12:24:00 AM
Lovingly made and creatively written Congratulations on a big win.
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Date: 1/30/2015 11:06:00 PM
Lovely memories Dr. Ram. Congratulations on the win! Verlena
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Date: 1/30/2015 7:31:00 PM
Such a sweet story this is ! Congratulations on your winning poem!!
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Date: 1/30/2015 6:59:00 PM
Oh...such a lovely heartfelt write, Dr Ram. Very lovely, indeed. Congrats on your well deserved win!
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Date: 1/30/2015 6:16:00 PM
A lovely take on the theme many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/30/2015 1:54:00 PM
A marvelous English quintain, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on a fine piece on an unusual approach to the prompt. Well-said.
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Date: 1/28/2015 1:14:00 PM
Your emotions and message lift themselves off the page and rest comfortably within the reader's heart. Emile.
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Date: 1/28/2015 12:24:00 PM
quite a different take on the topic... a beautiful and touching poem Dr. Ram.
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