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Magic Carpet Ride - With Poet Unknown

We fell onto the carpet Deep into each other Not realizing we started to sail High above cloud fear and uncertainties We gave in to our basic feelings Naturally coming to the surface The carpet sailed above the fireplace But its heat seem to go sailing with us The warmth spreads over my being Like a burst of sun through rain clouds Driving me to heights of ecstasy sublime On this magic carpet I feel the magic of your love Our passions mingled intertwined fused As the words from our fellow poets on PoetrySoup Our magic carpet comes in for landing Reluctantly we step off into the world of reality Leaving me with the insatiable need To go magic carpet sailing again Written By: Joy Wellington Aug 20 2012 For ~Skat~'s Contest: Magic Carpet Ride

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Date: 9/5/2012 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest Joy. Love, Carol
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/7/2012 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Carol!
Date: 9/4/2012 6:22:00 PM
HELLO SWEET JOY , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/4/2012 10:57:00 PM
Much thanks to you ~Skat~ for a super win...I am humbled, because I went up beside a lot of great poets. One love.
Date: 9/4/2012 12:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win and Whew! What a ride! :) Tanya
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/4/2012 10:58:00 PM
smiling here Tanya...and a ride it was...one love.
Date: 9/1/2012 12:49:00 PM
HI JOY, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, I WONDER WHO THE UNKNOWN POET IS... :-) always~PD
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 12:59:00 PM
Tnx PD!
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 12:59:00 PM
Ssshhhhhhh!!! LOL!
Date: 9/1/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations Joy, what a wonderful ride and win xx
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 11:36:00 AM
Tnx Golden Girl!
Date: 8/20/2012 11:55:00 PM
I can relate to this magic carpet ride! Your poem painted a passionate ride between lovers. I enjoyed reading it Joy. Good luck in the poem. Dalila
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 11:38:00 AM
Only lovers can relate Dalila...says something about you! smile.
Date: 8/20/2012 2:20:00 PM
I like you poem..nicely done.. good luck in the contest. cory
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 11:38:00 AM
Tnx Cory!
Date: 8/20/2012 12:06:00 PM
A romantic and magic ride on the carpet, Joy. - Lovely written - Wish you luck in contest (and love). - Have a beautiful new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 11:40:00 AM
Tnx Anne Lise...enjoy the weekend and the new week to come.

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