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Magic Beans

I found some strange multi coloured beans And planted them in well turned soil With care I watered them and pulled weeds yet after a month not one single shoot. I had cause to go down in my cellar looking for some tools and to my amazement it was full of leaves and flowers These strange plants grew under ground. Down, still further down they went so I climbed down and down At last I reached the bottom and all was upside down. A vast land where all walked upside down yes folks, they were walking on their heads some birds too flying upside down My head reeled and I climbed back up. I decided not to venture there again after all there is enough weirdness up here to last me several life times so no gold or giants just an upside down world written 01/31/2015 shadow Hamilton contest Magic Beans

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Date: 2/22/2015 5:51:00 AM
This is a great delight my very dear friend, Shadow. I enjoyed so much the read. Thanks a lot for sharing and my warm congratulations as well on your great win! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Shadow!
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Date: 2/16/2015 4:46:00 AM
Brilliant deep write Shadow, loved to read today! Congrats on awesome win!
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:29:00 AM
Shadow, CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT
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Date: 2/15/2015 5:49:00 PM
glad to see this one made the winners' list, shadow. I hope I have visited some of your newer poems lately. I am trying to keep up but not sure if I am really doing it. Congrats to you, dear.
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Date: 2/14/2015 4:49:00 PM
Cute story told in winning poetic form..I enjoyed reading your winner..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you stopping by..Congrats ...Sara
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Date: 2/14/2015 4:07:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day
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Date: 2/14/2015 2:50:00 PM
Such a magical and mystical story, Shadow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/14/2015 10:42:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/14/2015 12:38:00 PM
ty Jan hugs
Date: 2/14/2015 8:18:00 AM
Your poem is my fav. Congratulations on your win Shadow. Wish you Happy Valentine XXXX Rajat
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/14/2015 12:38:00 PM
aw ty so much Rajat hugs
Date: 2/14/2015 2:48:00 AM
Shadow, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/14/2015 12:37:00 PM
ty Linda will do hugs
Date: 2/2/2015 11:31:00 AM
A different look at "Jack and the Beanstalk" story. Full of insight and humor Shadow. Enjoyed your poem very much. God bless)))) rajat
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/14/2015 12:36:00 PM
Ty Rajat hugs
Date: 1/31/2015 9:38:00 PM
this is a very unique and clever tale you have woven, Shadow. I like it very much!!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/1/2015 1:06:00 AM
ty Andrea good to see you hugs
Date: 1/31/2015 8:03:00 PM
How wonderful,Shadow, I love your magical world of upside down, I might fit in. a 7 Blessings dear friend
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/1/2015 1:08:00 AM
ty Eve all aboard lol hugs
Date: 1/31/2015 6:28:00 PM
a magical mystical story Shadow - I have enough trouble dealing with being in the upright world at the moment lol - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/1/2015 1:07:00 AM
ty Jan know that feeling hugs
Date: 1/31/2015 5:57:00 PM
Interesting events that took place with your means, nice imagination.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/1/2015 1:06:00 AM
ty Casarah hugs

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