Magic

this summer morning sun,highlights the pampas palm bathing in the heat- as nature,in siesta celestial heaven meets lazy,rests my soul as contentment's shalom flows silence has its say- fleetingly,nothing matters then,in thankfulness..I pray Brian Strand Bag of tricks

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/25/2011 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/24/2011 4:43:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS ! very glad and proud to share the placement with you. . .a great and clever poet blessed with an almost limitless thoughts. . . .*-* junjun

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2011 4:22:00 AM

hey Brian, well done, congrats, David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2011 8:37:00 PM

Great faith based work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 2:10:00 PM

My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 1:59:00 PM

Congrats Brian on your success in my contest and thankxx for your constant support... stunning lines.. thankxx for my HM in your last contest too..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 12:19:00 PM

this really conveys the essence of the title Magic, Brian. It's a very lovely entry to the contest. Congrats on your win.

Elaine George

Date: 7/13/2011 11:11:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Brian. A Tanka Masterpiece. Elaine

Farah Chamma

Date: 7/10/2011 1:36:00 AM

Every word is where it's supposed to me..lovely write Brian..I've missed reading you..farah

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/6/2011 7:33:00 AM

enjoyed reading today!! prayer calms the savage beast....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2011 7:08:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here this morning in my Soupland. Words pouring onto paper from poets souls. What a joy to be able to sit and read such wonderful poetry for awhile today. Have a very good day Brian. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/6/2011 4:05:00 AM

hi Brian, very deep and moving good luck in the contest. David