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Madness

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Below is the poem entitled Madness which was written by poet Diane Locksley. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Madness

Driving home in the dark through blinding rain
Hassles at the office plaguing my brain
Longing to escape life in the fast lane

Motorists are cussing with words profane
From shouting back, I struggle to refrain
Car mirror shows my forehead’s bulging vein

Sense of sanity I try to maintain
My heart races and I’m feeling chest pain
What is the point I try to ascertain

Thoughts of ending it I now entertain
To repel these notions I have to strain
Remembering Jesus never complained



Entry for the March Madness Contest

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  1. Date: 3/11/2011 2:27:00 AM
    How beautifully you have exposed the curses of modern living. I was worried about the mad way of driving their motorcycles here in India, but this appears to be a global problem and highlighting in such a thrilling way is wonderful. Congrats, for your wonderful win in Carolyn's March Madness. A well deserving wins my friend. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Diane Locksley

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 1:59:00 PM
    Many congratulation's Diane on your win in Carloyn's "March Madness" contest....:)

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 11:03:00 AM
    Awesome Rhyme, Diane. Congratulations on your fine win in Carolyn's Contest. Annalise

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 9:05:00 PM
    excellent Diane, your poem is so typical of the way of the world today. this is a wonderful way to express it. congrats, Harry

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 3:28:00 PM
    Congrats on a well deserved win, Diane. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 2:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on this HM win in the contest of Carolyn, Diane

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 12:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's "March Madness" contest Diane. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 12:01:00 PM
    So great Diane to see your success with this worthy honor. Congratulations on a great poem's honor. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 7:57:00 AM
    You did a fine job with your poem, Diane. Congratulations on your honorable mention. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 12:05:00 PM
    A vivid write, sharing you madness with us Diane, good luck for Carolyn's contest :) Wilma

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 11:15:00 AM
    true feelings expressed Diane, such is the seed of poetry, thank you for the comment the poem was based on a variety of ideas and enlightenment.

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 8:10:00 AM
    Very powerful, Diane - and thanks for your kind words on my poem : ) Jack

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 10:14:00 PM
    Nicely done, Diane!! Those crazy drivers!!

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 6:11:00 PM
    beautiful ending with devotional and meaningful thought, Diane.

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 6:09:00 PM
    :) Thanks for supporting the contest, Diane. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 5:54:00 PM
    I felt as though I were sitting beside you, traveling through this rain storm. What a masterpiece..Best wishes for the contest...