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Made In the Shade

Some people are driven to succeed In their chosen fields of endeavour To me, success is measured By a happy home life And the number of friends one accumulates Through the years Quality of life is all important Not the number of cars in our driveway Not the amount of dollars in our bank account Friends are a true gauge of our success Lifelong friends are like pure gold A treasure that is unmeasurable Add that to a happy family life And you have it made in the shade © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 9/10/2014 10:41:00 AM
My home life was my life, till Dragon came along. Now we run track, and have fun, as I remain at home! He helped me paint the house, the other day. My part was to remain on the ground. Still I fell and it took 3 tries to get up off the ground. The paint flew all over, as Dragon tracked it around! Whoa is me his foot prints went up a tree! How he did it I'll never know! The hose cleaned all including his feet. Tho I kept them on the tree. Too unique, those prints to see! Totally amazing to see!
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Date: 9/8/2014 10:27:00 PM
you own this approach to poetry always a delight. always a treat.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/9/2014 6:02:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, my friend! Very much appreciated! Cheers!
Date: 9/8/2014 5:15:00 PM
Hi Jack! The currents brought me all the way to your lovely poem today! I agree with you...family and true friends are what make life's treasures! Materialistic things are useful, but not on top of the list. cu my friend. // paul
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2014 6:13:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Paul! Great hearing from you! Cheers my friend!
Date: 9/8/2014 3:30:00 PM
Well stated my friend...cheers Tim
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2014 4:59:00 PM
Coming from you, Mr. Tim, that's quite a compliment! Thanks a bunch! Cheers!
Date: 9/8/2014 10:29:00 AM
Truly beautiful poem Jack ! I two hundred percent rhyme wid u on this perspective of life! Hv a great day!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2014 4:57:00 PM
You are always so nice to me my dear Upma! Thank you a bunch AGAIN!!! Hope your day was a good one! Loving hugs, Jack XOX

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