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Madame Butterfly

Her gentle nature, soft like rain held fragile beauty, like her name In this fragrant blossom, he found bliss Eluded her with a tender kiss And gentle strokes would touch her cheek A promised love he wouldn't keep With fickled breath, he took her heart He toyed with her, he played a part, He stole her love, then sailed away And told her he'd be back some day Her face looked out from ocean shore With undying hope, a child she bore Sun and moon would hear her song, faint sweet echo of a song her cradled child, the days grew long They waited in the ocean's breeze With futile hopes that wouldn't cease The stars were shining, love was crying With pining ache, her heart was dying Convinced his love had been so pure She learned a truth,... could not endure Another shore he had a wife In disgrace, she took her life! BUTTERFLY!! ... Butterfly!! ... butterfly..................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/3/2008 3:14:00 AM
Wonderful ingenious Witing, Carrie. I love Madame butterfly. Her music will forever play in my heart.
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Date: 11/20/2008 8:15:00 AM
Yes, what can I say except poor butterfly - so unfair and to lose her lover and child - never tire of this beautiful opera.. Thank you for your comments on my poem..
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Date: 11/19/2008 12:06:00 PM
yes a touching piece of poetry.
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Date: 11/18/2008 12:43:00 PM
Poor Butterfly. Fritz Kreisler made a recording of this 1920s song. I loved it. Puccini would have loved it. I love your synopsis. Love, daver
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Date: 11/18/2008 8:06:00 AM
One of the great stories, but like "Titanic", it always has the same ending. Still. it is ageless. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/18/2008 5:38:00 AM
Gosh Carrie, this is horribly sad! Wow, so well written leaving the reader quite emotional at the end. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/18/2008 3:46:00 AM
Poor butterfly indeed! A very gentle, and pretty write dear lady! It flowed very well. :) Love Kristin
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Date: 11/18/2008 2:05:00 AM
Beautiful words Carrie.One for my favourites listing I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings/blogs
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Date: 11/17/2008 7:14:00 PM
Oh, Madam B...how I love that sad old opera..the music is some of the best ever written. thanks for this moving replay. BG
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