Macabre

beware the dark night zombies lurk to snatch raw flesh -- blood oozing on nails in macabre hours-- spiked claws rip heart valves for howling carnage say all your prayers before chainsaws rupture heads-- massacre starts, now Contest of Tracie: Spooky 'Ku by nette onclaud

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/2/2012 12:06:00 AM

Yikes!!...MACABRE for sure!...Now I'm scared to go outside!...Great entry, Nette and congratulations, of course - Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/1/2012 4:11:00 PM

Nette, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/30/2012 2:33:00 PM

Congrats on your fabulous win, Nette! Sc-a-a-ry! Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2012 1:53:00 PM

Nette, I loved the descriptiveness of yours. BIG congrats on your win.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/30/2012 9:57:00 AM

Big Congratulations to you friend Nette for winning Tracie’s “”Spooky Ku” contest. Happy Halloween!(^_^) hugs!!

Len Gasun

Date: 10/30/2012 7:56:00 AM

Big congratulations with big hugs on your win my dear Nette! love/hugs:)LG/Norie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2012 6:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Patricia Ellis

Date: 10/30/2012 2:59:00 AM

Spooky ku! Happy Haloween !

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/30/2012 2:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your spooky ku nette xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2012 2:21:00 AM

Congratulations with your spooky Halloween Haiku poems! - Hoping for a scary Halloween night - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Booooo

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/30/2012 12:44:00 AM

Wonderful win for wonderful poem, my friend. Loved always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/30/2012 12:12:00 AM

SUPER CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A MAJESTIC SPOOKY KU WRITE AND TOP OF THE CHARTS WIN .. LUV IT LUV ..

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/29/2012 11:58:00 AM

Good luck in the contest and Happy Halloween Matthew Anish

Kash Poet

Date: 10/25/2012 3:48:00 AM

Enjoyed these spooky ku very much Nette!Best wishes to you.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/24/2012 9:46:00 AM

This reminds me of walking dead and texas chainsaw massacre movie.. Wouldn't want a nightmare after reading this ;)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/21/2012 7:34:00 PM

Hi, nette! Hope you're always fine. Yes, I am! Have a nice day always there! hugs tight, Leonora/norie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2012 1:28:00 PM

Whoa!!Scary one..Very descriptive Halloween work..If for a contest, winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by ..I have finished my Luna now..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2012 11:18:00 AM

wow, now THAT'S how to do scary Ku. it's for the contest , right? I would sure place this one on my winners' list!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/21/2012 9:46:00 AM

YES!! You did it Nette, you created an awesome Halloween write! I am so delighted to read such a wondrous write as this! I really really enjoyed this incredibly dynamic and honorable poem! You have done masterfully with these fine Haiku displaying wonderful zombies and their playful death marches! I love this remarkable and tremendous piece, very stupendous, Great Work!!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/21/2012 9:00:00 AM

‡ Night Of The Living Dead, The Howling, Texas Chainsaw Massacre *;* Spooky, I Was Waiting For Linda Blair To Pop Out Of The Screeen And Start Vomiting All Over My Pink Pee Soaked Dress, LOL. Love It. Hi, Sweet Beautiful Nette. Great Poe And Thank You For Passing By; Very Kind. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡

Jack Horne

Date: 10/21/2012 6:34:00 AM

just love these scary haiku, jNette. congrats on all your wins : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/21/2012 3:49:00 AM

I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. But you are my dear friend Nette . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)