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Lyric Advice

Hide, Hide Deep inside All those things That drive you wild Hush, hush Not a sound Of the secret Love you've found Cover, cover Undercover Keep the passion You discover Dream, dream A steady stream All the things that Make you scream Touch, touch Reach and touch All the things You crave so much Kiss, kiss A gentle kiss To the ones who bring you bliss Sip, Sip Take a sip Of all the things That wet your lip Burn, burn Ignite and burn With all the things That make you yearn Glow, glow Release your glow In waves of light That let love flow Sigh, sigh Let out a sigh For all the things That make you fly Eat, eat Be quick to eat All those things That make life sweet Seek, Seek Play hide and seek With the ones Who make you weak Feel, Feel Wake up and feel All the things That make life real. Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Richard D Seal

Date: 3/12/2013 11:45:00 AM

Eileen.... you're my favourite agony aunt, lol, wonderful, well done. Regards Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2013 5:45:00 AM

Well, if agony is what you're looking for and are into....you're in the right place. I do have a sense of humor though...it just likes to make a grand entrance now and then! :) Thanks for the visit! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/12/2013 8:07:00 AM

This is so great Eileen, you seem to be filled with inspiration these days.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2013 5:44:00 AM

Richard...ever watch that movie, The Thornbirds with Richard Chamberlain? The story goes that these birds sing their most beautiful some when they've been impaled by a thorn....I guess that sort of applies to my writing these days!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/12/2013 2:17:00 AM

it does get you like that sometimes your fingers seem to write for oyu don't they , wel they did a good job here xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2013 2:46:00 AM

Thanks, Mandy! :) Well...this comment of yours has my flying high! :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/11/2013 4:31:00 PM

i'll bet this just flew out of you. it's great!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 4:34:00 PM

Ilene...you know me so well! It did...I couldn't get to the computer fast enough! Was scared some of it would just fly right out of my scattered brained head! ;) Hugs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2013 3:02:00 PM

I like this one..We all need to be where we can feel..Sometimes things in life happen that hinder that from happening..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 3:03:00 PM

OOOPPPPSSS! Sara....thanks ever so much for your post! I don't know how this got mixed up! Can I blame the meds? ;) Thanks for the post! I appreciate it! Hugs!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 3:02:00 PM

Robert...thanks ever so much for this lovely post. I have been unwell, but I'm on the mend. This poem came to me in a strange way...and I couldn't get to the computer fast enough to get it all down! :) Simple...yet...what I feel at the moment!

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/11/2013 2:43:00 PM

This rhythem sets a mandate to the way I write my words. It sets the beat so very sweet like tapping little birds. I hope you have all of these things that you've joyfully said. For if your sick may life lift you completely out of bed. :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 3:04:00 PM