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Below is the poem entitled Lying which was written by poet Adam Adhistian. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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If I
Just start lying
On the ground,
Not making a

I wonder
How many
People will
And stare
And walk
Pass by
Like they 
Have seen 

I wonder 
How long,
How much time,
How many years,
Or centuries
I will 
Have to wait
Until someone comes
And asks
Whether I
Am breathing.

Copyright © Adam Adhistian

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Sigh... Good write. And yadda yadda the human condition and all that..

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 10:30:00 PM
    hello sir, you are a pro! a very nice poem, very clear and can be felt... -and if i tap you on your shoulder, will you make a sign or at least say hi? what only matters now, is to join you lie on the ground and stare at the sky-