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Lyin In Bed

roses are red violets are blue only if you knew how in love i am with you, maybe youd love me back, maybe love is something you lack youll lay in bed tonight with a face lit bright, ill lay in bed with a new thin line on my arm, in red trust me, you not knowing me is not why i do this cutting is just my new found bliss. if people knew, they'd call me crazy, if people knew, they might care

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/14/2015 10:37:00 AM
Your message is vivid, clear and conspicuously imaginative. Good work and definitely a 7
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Date: 5/11/2015 2:35:00 PM
thanks so much i appreciate your reply
Date: 3/24/2015 8:17:00 AM
People do care, Anastasia. By reading your first two poems, I know you have a good heart and a lovely soul. I already like that about you. But, there is One who loves you unconditionally, and always. He is Father to us all. He is the author of love. Look to Him for comfort. He alone will never fail you.
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Anastasia Denny
Date: 3/24/2015 10:05:00 AM
Yes I do believe this ,he has been there for me when no one else has

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