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My child, nightfall can be quite enticing when the trail of moonglow begins to set ; a lustrous hour could bring you to a realm with dreamy tales, one may never forget. Through glimmers of this pearled orb in the woods every leaf roller-coasts with winds’ embrace as orioles join the soft rhapsody to drift on the mystique of lunar grace: Be joyful like sunlight’s auroral flare iridescent ray tans a summer breeze a dazzle , a quiver on painted grass bewitches rich nature without unease. These keepers are life's harbingers of joy adorning flowers curling on your arms till sun-moon greets dusk with an intent wish-- for you, dear one, it ‘s a prayer for charms! Strand's 780 Contest

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Date: 5/31/2020 5:35:00 PM
This is so sweet with its lovely imagery, nette, and thanks so much for your comment to me on Rehash Hash. Sadly, I think some believed I was truly talking about hash.
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Date: 5/31/2020 2:19:00 PM
Be joyful like sunlight’s auroral flare... Yes everyone should! Lovely poem.
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Date: 5/30/2020 4:06:00 PM
The contrast between lunar mystique and sun's flare is capably projected, Nette. Both are enticing in their own special way...charming all the way! ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/29/2020 7:43:00 PM
The entire poem is enticing, compelling. A work of art!
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Date: 5/29/2020 5:13:00 PM
Beautifully rendered dear Nette, stay well, and happy xo
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Date: 5/29/2020 4:09:00 AM
You've captured the sun and moon well in your verse Nette. Good luck in the contest. Tom 65m
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