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Luster Gone

. Once new, shiny black Desired wanted loved obtained Soul worn luster gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Wilma Neels
Date: 10/5/2010 6:29:00 AM
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Interesting write Sara.. Love the the last line. How are you doing today? :) Wilma
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Danny Nunn
Date: 4/25/2010 8:22:00 PM
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Well this sort of thing can happen a lot..good write...thanks on Brain Washed...this old gal never quits..so I fight fire with fire,,thru poetry a God's gift...thanks Danny
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John Freeman
Date: 4/20/2010 5:25:00 PM
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Awesome Senryu Sara, was this for the contest? Agape, Moses
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Lynette Chachere
Date: 4/20/2010 8:06:00 AM
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many are soul worn. for the reason that they forget to rest, and don't undserstand that nothing has to be rushed, everything happens at its own pace for a reason.but people only wear themselves out still. your poem made me think of that. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Skat A
Date: 4/19/2010 7:49:00 AM
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Enjoyed, thank you...Have a nice day Sara....
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David Byrne
Date: 4/18/2010 11:46:00 PM
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applies to so many things!
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 4/18/2010 1:28:00 PM
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Very cool write Sara and good luck in Raul's contest which just closed.. extremely nice view of the photo... luv..Linda-Marie..
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 4/18/2010 11:55:00 AM
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Are you live right now, or napping?
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 4/18/2010 10:40:00 AM
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enjoyed mom!!
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Gert W. Knop
Date: 4/18/2010 6:10:00 AM
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I especially like your last line of this Senryu, Sara! Thank you for your uplifting comments and have a great time...Gert
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