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Lust For Gold

Lust for Gold The lives we live, made by free choice, Are guided by an inner voice. That clearly calls upon true hearts, Strength, withstanding, goodness starts. And faith, when born, becomes a rock. Singing God’s praises to His flock. Achieving mighty miracles, Believing…by trust uniting peoples. And every effort made by good men. Shall, their zealous choices defend – But people, against goodness disposed. Enrich their evils with ills proposed. Disparity soon shows its face. And dreams return from outer space. Greedy leaders seek their gold. And chuckle as their hopes unfold. © Name withheld for the contest May 10, 2010 Poetic Form: Couplets

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Date: 5/12/2010 9:00:00 PM
A very insightful work, nicely rhymed. good luck Dane Ann....Margaret
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Date: 5/12/2010 4:03:00 AM
So very appropo. Love esp. the last verse.Thank you for the comment._Robert
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Date: 5/11/2010 1:20:00 AM
Very thought-provoking, Dane Ann. But I tend to look for qualities in people that are not tied to material wealth. People who wish to marry gold are often let down; it provides little support for lasting love, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2010 10:48:00 PM
Dane......you are great......and so your verses..I'm Struggling to be here lately...Hope you are fine dear... hugs Charma
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Date: 5/10/2010 10:02:00 PM
GOOD WRITE, AND GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST
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