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Lust

It's that same old question of love and lust But I ask, is it not ingrained into our mind? I think that It is imbedded in everyone of us It is certainly enough to make you go blind For some it's less complicated the physical So they may just choose to go out on a whim Of course there's the side of being emotional But also it's just another feeling we have within Dose it matter if your not one who is religious Because then were told to resist temptation Being told what really are the principles of lust Just live your life in self denial, what of frustration? At time's both of them can leave your thoughts numb Especially when it is somebody that you really admire But natural instinct, of course it is animal magnitisium Everyone at some point has had a feeling of desire Again another excert from seven just an extra verse added and tweeked a few words a bit like I di with greed and spite poems WRITTEN ORIGINALLY 2012 REWRITTEN 2013 NOTE READERS THIS IS JUST AN EXCERT FROM POEM SEVEN I WANTED TO TWEEK A BIT AND ADD EXTRA VERSE ANOTHER OF MY FAVOURT SINS OR( THOUGH ID SAY ITS A SIN TO DENY WHAT YOUR HEART TRULY DESIRES) NOTE I WAS BROUGHT UP A CATHOLIC THOUGH i DONT AGREE THAT IT SHOULD BE LOVE ALL THE TIME WORKS IN PHERIY BUT NOT IN PRATICE THATS NOT TO SAY i THINK EVERYONE SHOULD JUST SLEEP AROUND I SUPOSE MY IDEA BEHIND THIS WRITE QUETSIONING IS IT A SIN MAYBE WE HAVE TO MANY AFFLICTIONS

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Date: 5/19/2013 3:07:00 PM
This is an awesome poem that describes so many components of Lust. Very well written. I was brought up Mormon so I can certainly agree with the religeous point of view, so stifling. Your writing exudes patience as you get each word n every line fitting together perfectly. I also have a poem titled Lust (Haiku form) :)
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