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"I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming" Constance La France ___ __ _ Did your breath call in sweet delightful dream did you call of promise o fascinating queen In loves treacherous battle could two devour pure a heart enrapturing completion a place where destiny soar Will you overtake me captivating a heart silent with despair your enchanting wind of flight, seductive, might, I come to share... I fight to elude your eyes, your entrancing promise I hear perhaps, just a small piece, but, do I dare... I watch your silhouette sway, from distant dream I gaze... _ __ ___ Poet ~ Rick Parise Contest ~ Daydreams and dreams and dreams Written ~ July 8,2011

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Date: 7/18/2011 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2011 5:30:00 PM
Dear Rick, Congratulations on YOUR well Deserved Placement in Constance's Contest ~ Daydreams and dreams and dreams " I fight to elude your eyes, " Superb line Are YOU going to put on the new POETRYSOUP's Sister site " Quotes " with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG ( Harry )
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:36:00 PM
Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your 2nd win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:53:00 PM
Great poem. It took me away. thank you Lee
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:41:00 PM
Such a beautiful dream Rick. Many conrats for this win.
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Date: 7/15/2011 8:05:00 PM
Beautiful Verse, Rick, Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:44:00 PM
wonderful art....CONGRATULATIONS! let me give you a big round of applause for this...smile*-* junjun
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:07:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your top ten victory with this first class poem luv..enjoy my friend.. classy ..
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:50:00 PM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Rick
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:22:00 PM
so glad you won with this dreamy verse! Light & Love
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Date: 7/8/2011 9:40:00 PM
entrancing, enrapturing, rick.. your words are a colorful strokes on a poetic canvas! winner for me! ;) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/8/2011 9:02:00 PM
gosh, I hope I didn't just make a comment to the wrong person just now! Did i say something to you about a medium? I meant to say something like that to George! About THIS poem, I just know Constance will love it. I especially liked the part "I fight to elude your eyes!"
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:12:00 PM
well it is something to think about Rick.. now don't forget the intro words necessary to enter contest luv... go check contest page again luv.. good luck in the contest.. that "doppleganger" poem was a last minute thought after I researched it online ..found it interesting concept... off to write about fairies now luv..
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Date: 7/8/2011 5:06:00 PM
Good write Rick... I'm sure the lovely Constance will like it too...
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Date: 7/8/2011 4:47:00 PM
You are slipping into half rhyme dream/queen [the eem & een sound] pure/soar [the ure & oar sound] best labeled verse...Light & Love
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