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Lust

lust is a scary thing fore it reduces us to base the core, the body without a face the pleasure of the pimp and whore lust bursts bubbles wide opening our lips to learn the contours of bodies that burn for more than the surface but what's inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/16/2009 10:44:00 PM
I love this one, excellent flow and powerful delivery.
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Date: 4/16/2009 6:01:00 PM
i love your style so much, i absolutly love it...your amazing
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Date: 4/16/2009 3:04:00 PM
this one great too,im glad my hands led me here,i like the last two verses,its so true,lust is based on desire,whilst love sees deeper,love sees the inside of the other,inside of the heart-charma
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:48:00 PM
wow I like this
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