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Sin Oh, my ... Desire, divine What I would give To nibble your saucy bits You are a wine-taster's banquet Each exquisite inch of your integument Hides a sweet savor all its very delectable own Poured to pique the primal compulsions And treat the tongue, its tang What a journey it could be Inch-to-sublime-inch A fiery feast Of you ... Skin. * FIRST PLACE in the "Contest 425 Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Sponsor. *

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/20/2018 5:25:00 PM

Beautifully sensuous poem, Gregory. I love the form you created. Congrats on your most deserving gold medal.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2018 10:34:00 PM

Many kind thanks to you, Line - I'm glad you liked it! Blessings, friend! :-) <3

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/20/2018 10:37:00 AM

Oh my! Sigh... sensual highly provocative poem you have here... skin on skin... and the form... beautifully written. A fave.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2018 10:33:00 PM

That's very kind of you, Susan - I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! A favorite genre/subject matter of mine. Blessings! :-) <3

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/20/2018 10:38:00 AM

Oh! Congratulations on your #1 win ... totally slipped my mind lol

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/20/2018 10:31:00 AM

Well written verse Greg, congratulations. Tom.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2018 10:32:00 PM

Thank you very much, Tom - blessings! :-)

Pailey Gordon

Date: 4/20/2018 10:07:00 AM

Beautiful format Gregory! I enjoyed reading this! Thank you:)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2018 10:32:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pailey - I'm glad you liked it! Blessings! :-) <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/12/2018 4:37:00 PM

The form you've employed to wrap this rapturous write should be classified, copyrighted, and canonized. Excellent! As always, gw :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/12/2018 8:38:00 PM

That's a wonderful comment, Gershon, and I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. Blessings, Friend! :-)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 4/12/2018 1:21:00 PM

Oh it s a really beautiful write, really enjoyed reading this one,

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/12/2018 8:38:00 PM

Very kind of you, Fraz - thank you so much! :-)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/11/2018 9:13:00 AM

Sizzlin sauciness x

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/12/2018 8:37:00 PM

Thank you, Mo! <3

Becca Teagan

Date: 4/8/2018 8:33:00 AM

Wow!! This is sizzling hot, mister, but so tastefully done. Beautiful word choices here.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/11/2018 12:53:00 AM

Very kind of you, Becca, thanks so much ... another one that's not getting comments. Maybe people have just stopped reading me, I don't know - this darkly-tinged sensual genre is a favorite of mine, and I usually get good response. Blessings for your appreciation, friend! <3