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Lure of the Moon

The tingling sound of the moon does lift me I float towards the heavens where I'm free I reach to the light that emanates there Beauty is like none that I can compare Swirling right near my head are the dark clouds It looks like this night sky has some dim shrouds The ground below me is moving away As I slowly, but surely, upwards sway I start to breathe the colder air that’s high The moon is getting bigger as I fly I see imperfections of the moon’s face Stars blink messages, I try to keep pace That grand lure of the moon that’s before me Brings me higher than I could ever see Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/3/2014 7:19:00 AM
the moon orb of mystery and haunting beauty Russell I love this pen it is super Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/30/2014 8:33:00 AM
Tnks for the mesmerizing journey to your moon. Lovely!!!
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:24:00 AM
I like this world of yours Russell a sonnet of note great pen Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/29/2014 1:07:00 PM
i see you are also a moon lover like me, russell... spectacular artwrods, russell; makes me want to take a deep breath and inhale the sense of tranquility your image gives... wonderful write as it is night here.. hggs
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Date: 1/29/2014 8:46:00 AM
The moon does have its pull..Enjoyed reading your creative work this morning..The moon has a strong pull I should say for it effects the tides..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were encouraging..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2014 6:31:00 AM
What a gem this is Russell.. A joy to read this beautiful piece of yours this afternoon :)
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Date: 1/29/2014 12:57:00 AM
Because it's the earth's only natural satellite, so many pieces of literature have been written about it. This sonnet poem of yours presents itself as a fine example of what a quality sonnet should be. Well done again, Russell.
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