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moved by music there's an up and down in every key... ...the puppeteer's ploy "I play a mean, Human." snickered the piano Lune Contest nette onclaud Visual 1 May 12th. 2020

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Date: 4/14/2021 7:32:00 AM
Charming and clever, Timothy ~
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Date: 5/18/2020 4:53:00 PM
Very clever... You have a bright mind
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Date: 5/16/2020 7:11:00 PM
An novel viewpoint and twist of words.Always a surprise in your poems. SuZ
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Date: 5/16/2020 8:26:00 AM
This is better on giving it a second read. The human, “I want to be a real instrument!”
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Date: 5/14/2020 2:18:00 AM
This is clever and cute Timothy. It brought a smile! Thank you. xxoo
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Date: 5/13/2020 11:47:00 AM
Wow Timothy - 'snickered the piano' - a definite win,so imaginative! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/12/2020 5:47:00 PM
verrrry interesting, Timothy. Does it have an extra underlying meaning?
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Date: 5/12/2020 5:38:00 PM
Brilliant viewpoint Poet...how can One complain about being played so powerfully. Great choice with having the piano snicker, frickin awesome idea. A FAV! I thank you as well for your comments on my work, they are valuable to me...J.A.B.
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Date: 5/12/2020 1:41:00 PM
Up down for sure in every key--your second stanza is awesome. All the best, Tim.
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Date: 5/12/2020 1:26:00 PM
I freakn' LOVE it! A fave all the way ~x Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 5/12/2020 12:50:00 PM
Cute!
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Date: 5/12/2020 12:31:00 PM
Love your interpretation of the picture Timothy, Good luck in the contest. Tom
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