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Lunar Beams Riding the Waves

Moon beams in distance. Carried by glittering waves, Reflecting an ageless tide! Rays of moonlight fall, Caressing, soothing, calming, Man's broken, weary hard heart! He stands in the sand Moonbeams touching his shoulder One giant step for mankind! The moon is falling, from the sky coming down fast! Can the mighty ocean last? Surf's up came the cry, Many feet come running by, Can we catch that last big wave?

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  1. Date: 12/7/2009 10:42:00 AM
    This peace speaks to my soul. I love the message here and your words flow as gentle as those moon beams on the waves. Beautiful and touching write, your calm nature shines through in this one. Well penned. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 3:16:00 AM
    very beautiful flow, with an enjoyable message, all packaged in a crisp-form! Marty! well done! and thanks for your comments! jimbo

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 5:00:00 PM
    "Can we catch that last big wave?" Perhaps we will! I like to be optimistic! Good job, Marty! Peace and love, Audrey Thank you for your kind comments!

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 10:57:00 PM
    How beautiful this poem is Marty,another for my Favz..Charma

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 8:24:00 PM
    thankxxx for enjoying The Legend.. u Marty are a gentleman.. something quite rare these days... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 11:47:00 AM
    Very clear picture you created here Marty. So vivid and alive, Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 3:35:00 AM
    (cont.)That reaction to the last big wave really captures the shallowness that is in existence. Excellent, Marty. Thank you for sharing. -Robert

  1. Date: 11/28/2009 3:29:00 AM
    WEll done Marty ! Very interesting write. opens eyes and the imagination. Robert

  1. Date: 11/27/2009 6:23:00 AM
    Drawing, sad, scary, and somewhat funny in a very few short lines. It was almost like being there. Very impressive. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 10:56:00 PM
    Powerfu images in this magnificent choka, dear Marty. It describes the photi in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 11/26/2009 6:10:00 AM
    Sounds like a surfer's paradise.. thankxx for this lovely piece today and your many kind comments on my poetry.. Jimmy Soup Mailed me and told me u sent him some of my poetry... thankxxx I so appreciate that gesture... can u send me a soup mail so I can write him directly or is that not allowed? u are a good friend, Marty, for doing such a nice thing for Jimmy ... happy T.Day.. and blessings and luv to u and family ... "Sweetie"

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 7:14:00 PM
    enjoyed reading today, is this inspired by Rauls picture? it put me in mind of that picture.

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 12:33:00 PM
    Hi Marty, thank you so much for your comment on my Haiku, I tend to struggle with this form. This Choka poem of yours is stunning, beautifully written.

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 2:47:00 AM
    Hello Marty ... Such A Beautiful Night-Sight, You've Painted ... Going Into My Favorites ... MoonBee

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 8:33:00 PM
    Hi Marty!...... this fine poem has a seemingly endless depth, in such a concise form! nice effect! jimbo