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Inspired by SKAT'S Butterfly contest. 

what monster are you that hides the moon what shade of darkness you consume glimmering wings of gruesome beast in search of your celestial feast flying high in evening sky I sit and quiver as you go by shimmering jade from lunar shadow candles burning opalescent glow flickering light circling nearer whispered flight becoming clearer alight you not on my spread fingers the pounding of my heart yet lingers but see you now as what you are you're not the beast that hides the stars you rest upon my hand so gentle lustrous green like yuletide tinsel softly brushing against my skin with breathy kisses my soul you win scorned are you by royal kin the weeping darkness hides your sin with who you are unsatisfied but your lonely secret I will hide while I wait for you a tear I'll cry as you flutter by my sweet butterfly
08/14/15

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Date: 8/14/2015 6:39:00 PM
James, nice write for the contest a fluttering 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, sittingintheshade, it was hot tea
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Date: 8/14/2015 4:16:00 PM
Halfway i was getting that it was a butterfly. It helped that I already several butterfly poems today too. VERY original. Thinking out side the box with THIS gem!
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Date: 8/14/2015 4:14:00 PM
dagnabbit. Sorry your January poem was not long enough for that one contest!! Let me see THIS new post now!
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Date: 8/14/2015 12:31:00 PM
A well written imagery laced write James...Tim
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James Inman
Date: 8/14/2015 2:04:00 PM
Thanks, Tim. I recently read your December poem. It was lovely. Good Luck!
Date: 8/14/2015 12:23:00 PM
this is wonderful James the imagery is delightful:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2015 2:08:00 PM
:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 8/14/2015 2:07:00 PM
Jan, you must be one of my most avid readers. I always appreciate your comments, thank you.-rjijr-
Date: 8/14/2015 12:04:00 PM
sweet, and held my interest! very nice
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James Inman
Date: 8/14/2015 2:09:00 PM
Janet, thank you for the nice comment.

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