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Lumpy Rumpy

Lumpy Rumpy, a rather large lad, Had a reputation for being so bad, He rolled a mega barrel down the hill, Full of dead fish and the content spill. The reeking aroma made people sad, With pegs on their noses they got so mad, The townsfolk chased Lumpy down the street, If they catch him up they might paddle his seat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/5/2015 9:30:00 AM
Hahaha...superb. I thoroughly enjoyed the antics of Lumpy Rumpy. Waiting to hear more of Lumpy Rumpy. A #7.
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John Williams
Date: 5/6/2015 4:22:00 AM
Well, I wasn't going to, but after your comment I will write another using Lumpy Rumpy. Thank you for the idea and your kind comment Nandita........kind regards-----John
Date: 5/5/2015 7:32:00 AM
A good child pleaser, you use good imagery and maintain a poetic flow throughout the whole piece. Emile.
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John Williams
Date: 5/5/2015 7:45:00 AM
Hello Emile, Thank you so much for your lovely comment, it is greatly appreciated. All the best Emile.....kind regards----John

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