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Lucy

She walked and talked in a world called theirs Worries she had with her earthly cares Found near Hadar, this specimen of old A lady from our past, lying stone cold She walked her lands amidst horses so small In the Awash Valley where trees were so tall Naked to bare, all her kin were the same In a land so different, to she not strange What would she be seeing if we could see through her eyes Would there be hate and hurt and a typical despise Maternal and loving we can only assume In the valley where she lived, we have the same front room And just as we, she was born to die Evolutionary in exist, below the same blue skies She walked and talked in a world called theirs Worries she had with her different cares This lady I talk of, Lucy we have named From our past she existed, with a different fame She was the oldest of us ever found Lying stone cold on earths ancient ground http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-15.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/16/2011 8:58:00 PM
WoW! What a fine tribute to a lady we will never really know much about. So much mystery here. Great job and fine verse my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/15/2011 2:15:00 PM
Lucy is my other name and I am heading that way but hope fully the trip will not be hard. I really enjoyed this.
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Date: 6/14/2011 3:56:00 AM
excellent perspective and well written James. Puts one there and gets one to thinking . I enjoyed it
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Date: 6/11/2011 10:01:00 PM
Very interesting, James. What came to my mind was a woman in a trilogy, one of the stories was called in the Valley of the horses. Oh, Clan of the Cave I think was the first set in the trilogy. SOmething about this just made me think of that story!
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Date: 6/10/2011 10:37:00 AM
A fine piece of poetry...interesting and well told.
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Date: 6/8/2011 9:41:00 PM
We are all born to die..though not yet..not yet,right semaj?:),i wonder what i see through Lucy's eyes,most probably i see what you see..yep!enjoyed reading your awesome poetry dear friend of mine..
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James Fraser
Date: 6/9/2011 3:05:00 AM
Thank you always for your kind words Celene. I'm off to Glasgow today to see Journey, Styx & Foreigner. Back Saturday around tea time 6pm. Have a lovely week-end :)
Date: 6/8/2011 10:20:00 AM
beautiful write, enjoyed it very much.
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Date: 6/8/2011 9:53:00 AM
I love this piece, James
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