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Luchando Por El Amor

Being alone but not lonely Enjoying silence and appreciating my space Then he says you're my one and only And how he's dreamt of my embrace Up the walls go higher Deeper the foundation is built But nothing seems to extinguish his fire In the blade goes to its hilt He staggers, he tumbles, he falls to his knees A glimpse in his eyes and and the truth is seen Mi corazón in its place is put at ease He's unharmed and looks up with a smile so sheen Being alone but not lonely Enjoying silence and appreciating my space Then i says you're my one and only And how i’ve dreamt of your embrace

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Date: 6/14/2016 4:39:00 PM
Nice piece. I like its use of metophor. In the third verse is the that a typo "stager" I Instead used " staggered" please. Lovely piece
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